안되는영어 Writing 3. IELTS general task writing 2: Advantages and Disadvantages

문제: University studies are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

Introduction

-Rewrite "general statement"

-Mention the main "advantages" and "disadvantages"

-Give your opinion

Many university students routinely study in other institutes worldwide as part of their degrees.  Although students will often struggle with cultural and linguistic challenges while abroad, they will also gain significant life experiences that will reward them later in their careers.  In my opinion, students are better off having studied in a different country despite the challenges that they will inevitably face. 

Paragraph 1  Main advantage

Outline the main "advantages"/ Give reason/s, Give example/s / Restate the main "advantages"

The great benefit of studying abroad is that students will have life experiences that will improve themselves as people which would have been otherwise impossible if they had only studied in their own countries. Being in another country requires people to push themselves beyond the norm into unusually difficult experiences. For example, when I studied in Indonesia and India as a twenty-year-old. I was continually pushed out of my comfort zone in psychological states that were unique and novel and that I had to adapt no matter what. These ultra-challenging experiences are paradoxically the main advantage of studying overseas because they make you grow as a person.  

Paragraph 2 Main disadvantage

Outline the main "disadvantages" / Give reason/s. Give example/s / Restate the main "disadvantages"

The main challenges that students will face while overseas will usually stem from cultural and linguistic differences.  These differences can pose massive obstacles for people because they require one to move beyond the familiar and into the unknown which can often be awkward and quite scary. For instance, while studying in Indonesia I had to frequently make a fool of myself in order to communicate with the local people in their language. Oftentimes, I felt embarrassed and I longed to speak English and be in the familiarity of my own culture.

Conclusion

Rewrite "general statement"

Mention the main " advantages" and "disadvantages" again

Studying overseas has become incredibly common. While students will no doubt experience social and language barriers, it is in fact these barriers that lead to the main advantage of studying abroad which is personal growth. As a contradiction of sorts, it is the hardship that ultimately makes the experience of studying abroad more advantageous than disadvantageous.

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